tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8711999366683033106.post2167675183852740422..comments2023-09-10T04:25:50.829-04:00Comments on Revision Warriors: Honorary Warrior, Christy 2 of 5Rina Heiselhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16428957510374534772noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8711999366683033106.post-81264426558884709672014-08-29T02:09:29.110-04:002014-08-29T02:09:29.110-04:00Yay! I'm so glad you found my feedback helpful...Yay! I'm so glad you found my feedback helpful! :) I really enjoyed this snippet of your story. Katie's voice shines! Best of luck to you with your writing endeavors!! :)Diane Bohannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10649770737967864449noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8711999366683033106.post-236319679029556432014-08-28T10:42:19.141-04:002014-08-28T10:42:19.141-04:00Hi Diane! I am totally smiling -- so happy that yo...Hi Diane! I am totally smiling -- so happy that you felt curious about the feather and what would happen next. Thank you so much for the great edits. I loved what you said about first indicating a timeframe. I have never thought about that, and noting more detail about when Katie found the hideout is such a cool idea -- I LOVE that! Thank you so much -- this whole opportunity has been such a wonderful experience and I'm so grateful for your expert feedback!Christy Otownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16858296621550466105noreply@blogger.com