tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8711999366683033106.post3816019677501258053..comments2023-09-10T04:25:50.829-04:00Comments on Revision Warriors: Honorary Warrior, Christy 5 of 5Rina Heiselhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16428957510374534772noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8711999366683033106.post-91844545429047885922014-08-28T10:10:23.520-04:002014-08-28T10:10:23.520-04:00Wow, thank you so much!!! I am a big fan of your ...Wow, thank you so much!!! I am a big fan of your writing. It's such a gift to have this feedback from you.<br /><br />You are a master at voice -- it's so helpful to see how you make everything closer and in the moment. It's especially helpful to see where I'm telling instead of showing. And I love the idea of a little foreshadowing! Thank you so very much!Christy Otownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16858296621550466105noreply@blogger.com